keep in mind that they are 12 years old during this story so everyting is kept relatively innocent. First time I have seen a romance developing by beating the shit out of each other. The friendship between Jasmine and Naruto is so sweet it can give you cavities. There is a bit of angst in this story but in a good way. "if the alternative where to happen, I woudn't want to live at all."" Tell me thats not someting Harry would say. "Why hurt yourself? why do you ALWAYS sacrefice yourself?!" Such as getting injured all the time, saying "I'm fine" when she's obviously not, mixed luck (that that can be seen as just the normal team 7 luck) and this scene where she confronts a evilish version of herself. Jasmine wile obviously different from Harry in some ways still has all those charackteristics that make Harry Harry. Mostly follows the Naruto plot line so if you are tired of that than this can get tedious. I'm almost completely sure they do" is not usualy a thought that six year olds have. "I wonder if they notice the haunted look in my eyes. There is deus ex in the beginning with the tranportation from hpverse to narutoverse and the transfer of the knowledge, by mind jutsu, about a whole language that you just have to accept. No Nononono, not 'name', not him, wake up, pleasepleaseplease, it's not funny, wake up! 'name'!" There is the odd typo such as a space missing between words but its rare.Ĭorrect grammer is sometimes sacreficed for realisme of thoughts and drammatics.Įxp: "No. Spelling and grammer is mostly ok as far as I have noticed. Warning: Abuse in chapter one, mentions of abuse in following chapters. Summary: A bout of not-accidental magic transports six-year old Jasmine Potter to the Elemental Nations, where she becomes a member of one of Konoha's clans and finally creates bonds with new friends.
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